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  1. "I don't know if the dances I have in mind are quite guilty enough," Guinan said, smiling back at him.

    "I'm sure I shall enjoy them all the same," Jean-Luc said.

    Really love those two lines. Just the easy way they converse, but also the way they're growing closer. And yet, they already are, too. Their bantering feels seasoned. And I love the very gentle and mature way they decide to take the next step. There's no pressure there, just-- grace, flowing like water. Gorgeous work!

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      Thank you! I just love those two, they have such great chemistry, they're a joy to write. I like mature characters, which they are, whether as friends or lovers.

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