Comment on Warnings Unheeded in Darkest Night

1. SevereAnnoyance on Chapter 4 Sat 19 Aug 2023 07:35PM UTC

   

   This is such a tricky situation with so many potential pitfalls—the question of who is and isn’t the aggressor, the issue of colonization plans in this sector, the issue of finding out what happened to the Esau. I continue to adore the relationship between Trujillo and Glal, and Trujillo’s mentorship of Garrett. (The parental helping pack for the field trip made me aww, and then the mother hen crack!) And then the conversation with Jarrod! The relationships are so balanced, and what a way to introduce the romance!

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2. 1. Gibraltar on Chapter 4 Sat 19 Aug 2023 10:00PM UTC

      

      I'm pleased you're enjoying the characterizations, and that they're coming across as I'd hoped. Thanks again for reading!

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