Comment on Warnings Unheeded in Darkest Night

1. ChrisQ on Chapter 1 Tue 22 Aug 2023 12:33AM UTC

   

   I like all the little hints you slip into the dialogue as to what has transpired between characters in the past. Makes one wonder about their history and if it will be explored any further in future works.

   And I always like seeing familiar names, like Demora Sulu and Rachel Garrett, of whom we haven't seen much. The exchange between Garrett and Trujillo really spoke to me - it always bugs me when someone gets non-consensually shanghaied away from their assigned duties when they had their perfectly legitimate reasons for requesting them.

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2. 1. Gibraltar on Chapter 1 Tue 22 Aug 2023 03:08AM UTC

      

      I'm glad you're enjoying the tale. I really liked having the opportunity to include Ensign Garrett on her first assignment out of the academy, even if it's not precisely what she'd hoped for. The young woman certainly doesn't have any difficulty standing up for herself! :D

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