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1. sixbeforelunch on Chapter 4 Sun 05 Nov 2023 04:17AM UTC

   

   Nice chapter! I really like the conversation between Hawthorne and Chester. It's interesting to see how he's clearly so suspicious and poor Chester has no idea why her chief engineer is so cranky.

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2. 1. squireofgeekdom on Chapter 4 Sun 05 Nov 2023 02:41PM UTC

      

      Thanks! Yeah, everybody is having a rough day here. Conversations where both parties are having a Wildly different conversation are fun to write :D Thanks for commenting!

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