Comment on Slings and Olive Branches

1. B_Radley Mon 08 Jan 2024 12:42AM UTC

   

   I’m so glad SLWalker pointed me in your direction.

   Great characters right out of the gate. I love that both Trujillo and Gial know each other so well and that they are both prepared for this little ‘diplomatic solution.’

   With an attack cruiser.

   Trujillo can read the Brigadier so well, to appeal to the part of him that would prefer glory over money, in a dying Empire.

   But your characterization is made even more powerful by her bit of vulnerability after it was all over.

   Looking forward to more!

   Well done, and thank you!

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2. 1. Gibraltar Mon 08 Jan 2024 01:03AM UTC

      

      Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I'm pleased you enjoyed your introduction to the Reykjavik crew and their adventures, and I hope you'll stick around for more.

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