Comment on Warnings Unheeded in Darkest Night

  1. I love how human you make Nandi. She is fallible, she makes mistakes, but she knows it when she does and I’m sure she doesn’t make the same mistake.

    She’ll probably make all new ones, but that is what makes her a good captain. She knows that she can make them.

    The description of the battle is harrowing and so well written, with the slightest details.

    Glal. Damn. Three torpedoes?

    Lots of vulnerability for Nandi, and for Gael from her.

    Glal’s reaction is priceless.

    Well done, and thank you!

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    1. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, Nandi messes up on occasion, as everyone does from time to time. Lucky for her she has Glal to bail her out!

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