Comment on Star Beagle Adventures Episode 8: South Side of the Sky

1. CeJay on Chapter 12 Thu 11 Apr 2024 08:11PM UTC

   

   Okay, the the fast forward was a bit jarring and I had to go back to make sure I hadn’t missed anything. This is an interesting culture you’ve put together and I almost feel like the purple could’ve benefits from a bit more world building. Although I do appreciate the generally brisk pace of your storytelling.

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2. 1. LordRobertBruceScott on Chapter 12 Sat 13 Apr 2024 12:49AM UTC

      

      Worry not... They'll be back in detail... Thanks!! rbs

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