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  1. MirandaFave Sat 13 Apr 2024 09:42PM UTC

    You had me at: "I’m Erica Ortegas. I fly the ship.

    Honestly. I just love Erica. I'm dying to see more of her character explored but everything from her is golden. I love how you have expanded on that and hinted at a whole richer story. And that perhaps maybe, the mantra steadies her. That the mantra is a shield. That the mantra is the bubble she wraps herself in to hide from the war. It could be nothing it could be something a whole lot more. I dunno but this piece leaves me hankering for more.

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