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  1. B_Radley on Chapter 1 Thu 09 May 2024 04:09PM UTC

    Yep! The Sebby will play an important role in this story. The wreckage is an important clue, one that will at least lead to more of a clue (or two).

    Thanks for the catch on Gaveka. That’s what I’ve used in the other stories, though I’ll probably find more. They have a great dynamic which will get explored a little bit more.

    They’re throwing some hands, as they say, but it brings it home that there’s a few things afoot. And Croft of course, never brings trouble.

    I really appreciate that the scene with Mary resonated with you. There will be more, as she plays a bigger part in the search for her daughter and the others.

    Thanks so much for the read and the comment!

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