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1. B_Radley on Chapter 4 Sat 13 Jul 2024 10:06AM UTC

   

   “…seems to end in too much phaser pointing.” Truer words were never written or spoken.

   I love the mistrust of all of them, especially the two towards DeWinter. That Piper continues it, analyzing constantly whether or not Chester can be trusted is so write for what I’ve learned about them reading this story.

   Loving to see where all this mistrust is going.

   Well done, and thank you both!

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2. 1. SevereAnnoyance on Chapter 4 Sat 13 Jul 2024 09:46PM UTC

      

      Oh yeah DeWinter absolutely should not be trusted. And Chester may be new to this kind of thing but she's learning quickly...

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   2. 1. B_Radley on Chapter 4 Sat 13 Jul 2024 09:51PM UTC

         

         Ugh. ‘Right’ not ‘write.’ Just noticed that.

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      2. 1. SevereAnnoyance on Chapter 4 Sun 14 Jul 2024 11:05PM UTC

            

            Hadn't even noticed!

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