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  1. Another wonderful addition. Both for its exploration of the scientific mystery that is vexing Rachel, and the mystery that is Helvia’s life and faith.

    Even the addition of a geologist still builds on the mystery, adding more layers, for Rachel.

    As for Helvia, you portray his sadness at the loss of others of his faith, but still his beliefs aren’t shaken.

    Such a great build. Looking forward to more.

    Well done, and thank you!

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