Comment on Domum Soli

  1. B_Radley on Chapter 10 Tue 06 Aug 2024 01:53AM UTC

    Lots of great worldbuilding her for your world. Great characterization of Curzon, as well as added depths to Nandi and her ability to accept that criticism and grow from it.

    I love Helvia’s confusion and the strange visitor in his ensign. More mystery there.

    Well done and thank you!

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    1. Gibraltar on Chapter 10 Tue 06 Aug 2024 02:43AM UTC

      If nothing else, Nandi can admit when she's wrong or doesn't know something.

      And yes, strange things are afoot on and around Magna Roma.

      Thanks for reading and commenting!

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