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  1. B_Radley on Chapter 13 Mon 02 Sep 2024 08:10AM UTC

    Great dialogue with Helvia and a former gladiator. Sewing a few seeds there that might be necessary, given the actions and reactions of the ‘leadership’ to the proposals.

    Love the thought that you put into your task forces and their organization.

    It’s not nice to throw things in a diplomatic meeting.

    Nandi might throw grenades back…

    Well done, and thank you!

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    1. Gibraltar on Chapter 13 Tue 17 Sep 2024 06:04PM UTC

      Thank you.

      Helvia's having a tough trip 'home', but at least his interactions are reinforcing his family's justifications for having fled the planet.

      Oh, Nandi would definitely throw grenades back, which is why Curzon is so careful not to allow her to bring any! :-D

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