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  1. B_Radley on Chapter 5 Sat 21 Sep 2024 12:27AM UTC

    Great addition!

    Love the interaction between all levels of the Musashi. The MarDet major may take a bit of watching, as well as some extra trust shown, to make the chip on her shoulder a bit smaller.

    All vivid and well-drawn characters. Can’t wait to read more of this beginning.

    And the plaque—well done in concept and execution.

    Well done, and thank you!

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    1. LordMcCoveyCove on Chapter 5 Sat 21 Sep 2024 05:05AM UTC

      The County of McCovey Cove

      Thanks, Boo!

      Major Sh'vaares is someone I wrote specifically to be a dramatic foil of sorts if I ever circle back around to want to write this part of Leo's career again. I feel like she will prove to be a focal point for Musashi's crew, especially with a light battalion aboard.

      Appreciate you reading and your kind comments!

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