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  1. B_Radley on Chapter 4 Sat 21 Sep 2024 11:50AM UTC

    The mystery deepens. I’m wondering if someone was using Sutton to further their own wishes to get rid of the victim.

    And the depth of characterization is spot on especially with Reter.

    Well done, and thank you!

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    1. LordMcCoveyCove on Chapter 4 Thu 26 Sep 2024 04:18AM UTC

      The County of McCovey Cove

      Thank you, Boo! I try my best to really dive into the characters and represent their emotional states so you get a real sense of what they're experiencing as they're experiencing the events of the story. Sam/Gibraltar is the reason I transformed my writing after collaborating with him.

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