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1. Sharpest_Asp on Chapter 2 Mon 03 Jul 2023 12:03AM UTC

   

   I obviously need to read the source material sometime in the near future, as there's so much lush detail here in your tale that I want to renew my connection.

   I quite enjoyed the way you developed T'nor, and showed her journey. It's a slice of life out of a Major Historical Moment, in some ways, and I love it.

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2. 1. Beatrice_Otter on Chapter 2 Mon 03 Jul 2023 01:26AM UTC

      

      Thank you! Most of the worldbuilding and all of the characters were my own, a lot of it was extrapolating from stuff that is mentioned in passing. But the Rihannsu books are such a rich vein for worldbuilding that there's all kinds of places you can take something and really dig deep.

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