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1. hoodwinked Tue 04 Jul 2023 03:18PM UTC

   

   That last line, though. Break my heart why don't you *cries*

   I really like the way you wrote this, like there's a clear melancholy, bittersweet vibe all through and it really does the story's themes justice. I also really liked the second-person POV, it really worked for this fic. I hope in a hypothetical future in this fic's 'verse Keiko, Miles and Julian all live happily ever after, LOL. Because, again, pain. My heart. Oh, how you've wounded me, you dastardly author you.

   Thank you for sharing!

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2. 1. nostalgia Wed 05 Jul 2023 07:10AM UTC

      

      I hope in a hypothetical future in this fic's 'verse Keiko, Miles and Julian all live happily ever after, LOL.

      I hope so too! :D

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