I am definitely trying out a new storytelling technique here, and not one I've seen other writers use - at least not exactly this way.
It will be instructive as I use it again whether it connects with you. If it is not sufficiently intuitive for another skilled writer, then it probably won't work for the average reader and I'll have to revise.
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LordRobertBruceScott on Chapter 7 Wed 12 Jul 2023 09:04PM UTC
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