Comment on Leaving the Table

  1. hoodwinked Mon 17 Jul 2023 06:16PM UTC

    Heartwarming, strangely uplifting, and utterly heartbreaking. It's a short one, but you've packed in a roller-coaster of emotions, and I applaud your skill with words. *cue a mysterious sound of applause appearing*

    (The page reloaded while I was commenting cuz I left it alone for too long and for a second there I was Panicking •¤• but it was okay!!)

    Love this AU, and your portrayal of Jim. It's got a sort of melancholy vibe that I'm not always into but you've really nailed. I feel kind of sad for Jim—that last line! Way to break my heart, lol.

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    1. jamaharon Tue 18 Jul 2023 02:42AM UTC

      Oh god I’ve been there before when the comment box reloads and it always freaks me out 😱

      Thank you!! I like this one a lot, I think it would be really fun to expand it someday and figure out a role for Spock

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      1. hoodwinked Tue 18 Jul 2023 01:42PM UTC

        Oh, yeah, it is Fear™

        and I think it'd be absolutely fascinating to see Spock's role in this. whatever you decide to do, good luck!

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